Post by Deleted on Oct 14, 2018 17:13:39 GMT -5
Back on EP, and also on Similar Worlds, I liked the group for Ten Word Stories. I tried to make mine real stories with a plot and characters.
Here are some of the ones I made about relationships. Some optimistic, others not.
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"Fifty shades? I'd be happy with one" she thought bitterly.
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Love. Marriage. Doubt. Kids. Fights. Hate. Effort. Truce. Acceptance. Love?
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The movie sucked. When she held my hand it improved.
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She smiled.
I smiled back.
Her friend was behind me.
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Dawn. She's still here.
So it wasn't only a dream!
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She saw his name on the envelope; shredded it, unopened.
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He sounded like the perfect guy.
Then she Googled him.
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Bus stop.
He's enamored.
She doesn't notice.
She leaves.
"......bye."
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He thought they were happy.
But he was simply clueless.
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She wished. She waited. She hoped. But she didn't act.
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"Hey."
"Hi."
"You're cute."
"Thanks"
"My place?"
"Never!"
"OK.....
"Hey."
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"Will we ever?"
"Maybe."
"Really?"
"No, but you'll believe anything."
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You're disgusting."
"You're sickening."
"Eat sh!t!"
"Drop dead!"
"Dinner?"
"Sure."
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"If you don't drop the pretentious crap, I'm leaving!"
"Alas!"
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She removed his tie with her teeth. Things got interesting.
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That plastic bracelet was worth more to her than diamonds.
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He felt like a hapless, lone firefly as nightfall looms.
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"I'm sorry."
"'Sorry?!!' You're always 'sorry,' but nothing changes!"
"....Sorry."
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He loved her warm smile. Years later it turned icy.
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We met, flirted, drank, danced, laughed.
Then she said goodbye.
Here are some of the ones I made about relationships. Some optimistic, others not.
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"Fifty shades? I'd be happy with one" she thought bitterly.
---------
Love. Marriage. Doubt. Kids. Fights. Hate. Effort. Truce. Acceptance. Love?
----------
The movie sucked. When she held my hand it improved.
-----------
She smiled.
I smiled back.
Her friend was behind me.
----------
Dawn. She's still here.
So it wasn't only a dream!
-----------
She saw his name on the envelope; shredded it, unopened.
-----------
He sounded like the perfect guy.
Then she Googled him.
-----------
Bus stop.
He's enamored.
She doesn't notice.
She leaves.
"......bye."
-----------
He thought they were happy.
But he was simply clueless.
------------
She wished. She waited. She hoped. But she didn't act.
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"Hey."
"Hi."
"You're cute."
"Thanks"
"My place?"
"Never!"
"OK.....
"Hey."
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"Will we ever?"
"Maybe."
"Really?"
"No, but you'll believe anything."
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You're disgusting."
"You're sickening."
"Eat sh!t!"
"Drop dead!"
"Dinner?"
"Sure."
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"If you don't drop the pretentious crap, I'm leaving!"
"Alas!"
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She removed his tie with her teeth. Things got interesting.
---------------
That plastic bracelet was worth more to her than diamonds.
_--------------
He felt like a hapless, lone firefly as nightfall looms.
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"I'm sorry."
"'Sorry?!!' You're always 'sorry,' but nothing changes!"
"....Sorry."
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He loved her warm smile. Years later it turned icy.
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We met, flirted, drank, danced, laughed.
Then she said goodbye.
